hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 25,974 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Humanly relation


I read and reread
And all of sudden felt as if was dead
It was burst of unbearable anger
I really thought of life in danger

There is simple saying
Never stand alone when someone is spraying
Words as powerful bullets
To penetrate in your mind and crash the gate

Friend was shivering with rage
As if to make my existence on page
Never to be known to world
And push the entire memory in cold

What was he trying to say?
I wondered but still tried to pay
Some attention to his words
He was still readiness to use sword

I smiled at him with no more comment
Kept quiet and let him make some movement
He was finding it difficult
To carry with anger that was permanently inbuilt

“What type of person is this person” he might have thought
Not ready to exchange words with any of the reasons
I stood my ground well and responded nothing
That was the end of great battle to offer as something

World can be won over if one remains quite cool
Not those others are unreasonable and fool
But needs some special care and attention
With good behavior and humanly relation

Submitted: Tuesday, June 18, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, June 19, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 25,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2013 5:34:00 AM)

    so good Elizabeth Winters7 hours ago thumps up

    Ram Nath likes this. Ram Nath Welcome Back...Guruvar..! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .....//......I am unsure if their find in me But I have lot more to feel free Their love of unmatched magnitude That I can only show through sincere gratitude 6 minutes ago · Unlike · 1
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    Anasandra Azlin How very lovely, Hasmukh! Thank you! 9 minutes ago · Unlike · 1
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    Laila (*-*) wonderful
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    DEVKISHAN MEH.. NICE 1...

    P() () j@, good sir, , , , , ,

    prasad bolimeru never felt that sky was empty nice

    kind Reava Nuecome15 minutes ago very nice

    somanathan Iyer(6/18/2013 12: 04: 00 PM) great thinking! great expressions. Thank you.

    Hafiza.mehwish tariq11 hours ago BUT ON THE WHOLE GOOD (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2013 5:33:00 AM)

    Jeremy Carsey11 hours ago I thought it was thoughtful and full of emotion, heart. Comment +1 SOME SPELLING MISTAKES (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2013 5:32:00 AM)

    kudos! huffy hunter9 hours ago thanks for such a soulful poem..deserves the stars. Comment +1 Something people lack, sincere gratitude (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2013 5:32:00 AM)

    leafsailor
    I join you in this loving poem It is a true heart speaking, you are a dear friend of mine also! ! ! thank you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2013 5:31:00 AM)

    leafsailor
    I join you in this loving poem It is a true heart speaking, you are a dear friend of mine also! ! ! thank you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2013 5:31:00 AM)

    Some Girl
    A lovely poem of thanks - reminding us to be grateful for the little things, which are also the most important :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,682 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (6/18/2013 10:22:00 PM)

    welcome back.. You are recharged to bounce with words..Good day to you, Brother.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,974 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2013 8:55:00 PM)

    I read and reread
    And all of sudden felt as if was dead (Report) Reply

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