Humanly Relation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Humanly Relation

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I read and reread
And all of sudden felt as if was dead
It was burst of unbearable anger
I really thought of life in danger

There is simple saying
Never stand alone when someone is spraying
Words as powerful bullets
To penetrate in your mind and crash the gate

Friend was shivering with rage
As if to make my existence on page
Never to be known to world
And push the entire memory in cold

What was he trying to say?
I wondered but still tried to pay
Some attention to his words
He was still readiness to use sword

I smiled at him with no more comment
Kept quiet and let him make some movement
He was finding it difficult
To carry with anger that was permanently inbuilt

“What type of person is this person” he might have thought
Not ready to exchange words with any of the reasons
I stood my ground well and responded nothing
That was the end of great battle to offer as something

World can be won over if one remains quite cool
Not those others are unreasonable and fool
But needs some special care and attention
With good behavior and humanly relation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I read and reread And all of sudden felt as if was dead

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 18 June 2013

welcome back.. You are recharged to bounce with words..Good day to you, Brother..

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Some Girl A lovely poem of thanks - reminding us to be grateful for the little things, which are also the most important :)

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so good Elizabeth Winters7 hours ago thumps up Ram Nath likes this. Ram Nath Welcome Back...Guruvar..! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .....//......I am unsure if their find in me But I have lot more to feel free Their love of unmatched magnitude That I can only show through sincere gratitude 6 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 Deletejadia4708au Anasandra Azlin How very lovely, Hasmukh! Thank you! 9 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 Deletejadia4708au Verona J. Knight Cole-Ford and Author Kesha Finesse Murphy like this. Author Kesha Finesse Murphy Excellent write Heather Burns, Tribhawan Kaul and 2 others like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome jane3 and wahab sir a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1 Deletejadia4708au Laila (*-*) wonderful Deletejadia4708au DEVKISHAN MEH.. NICE 1... P() () j@, good sir, , , , , , prasad bolimeru never felt that sky was empty nice kind Reava Nuecome15 minutes ago very nice somanathan Iyer(6/18/2013 12: 04: 00 PM) great thinking! great expressions. Thank you. Hafiza.mehwish tariq11 hours ago BUT ON THE WHOLE GOOD

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Jeremy Carsey11 hours ago I thought it was thoughtful and full of emotion, heart. Comment +1 SOME SPELLING MISTAKES

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kudos! huffy hunter9 hours ago thanks for such a soulful poem..deserves the stars. Comment +1 Something people lack, sincere gratitude

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leafsailor I join you in this loving poem It is a true heart speaking, you are a dear friend of mine also! ! ! thank you

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leafsailor I join you in this loving poem It is a true heart speaking, you are a dear friend of mine also! ! ! thank you

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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