Human Body..A Perfect Structure.. Poem by abhilasha bhatt
Human Body..A Perfect Structure..
Human body
A perfect structure
Created by god
Send by god
On the earth
Holy earth
To survive
To starve
A body
Which can
Inhale
Exhale
Pain
Grief
Have a mind
Sometimes
Conscious
Otherwise
Unconscious
Given a heart
Which
Feels
Believe
Disbelieve
Anguish
Is
A troublesome
For others
Sometimes
For self
Troubleshooter
For you
For me
Bear torment
Few times
Give it
more times
Creep for nectar
Wander to wade poison
In the neck
Like Lord Shiva
Mortal
Human
But became
Demon
By making
Other's to imbibe
Each other
The nectar
A body
Came with
Whiff
Of love
Hate
Envious
Divided itself
For the sake
In the namesake of
Religion
Language
Status
Socialism
Money
Which
Get reduces
Into ashes
When heart
Stops working..
A sweet and well crafted poem Abhilasha... Human body is a miracle of nature perfected by evolution through centuries indeed.. Thanks for sharing - :)
Conscience! Let us respect this body. Thanks for sharing.
First of all many thanks for calling me Dadajan, number of my daughters and granddaughters is increasing rapidly. Now coming to this poem, it's a lovely thought nicely presented. I agree with you humans are the best self thinking computers of the known universe. I am still thinking if it's still in the controls of its maker or has gone out of control.
What a beautifully conceived poem! A body came with whiff of love and hate...which gets reduces into ashes when heart stops working. A true picture of humans presented with an economy of words. Well done Abhilasha.
Nice thought..........., . Well designed...... Thanks for sharing
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/22/2024 6:48:00 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Descriptive and informative. Nicely thought and written, Abhi....Loved it.
Thank you asim sir :)