Human Poem by Aisha Alansari

Human

Rating: 2.5


There are moments in life where I just close my eyes..really hard,
Stop the tears from streaming down cuz I'm sick of being torn apart,
Im not a robot you know?
I have feelings, I have a heart.

Every time I try to smile..
I just can't,
Every time I try to gain my strength,
I just can't stand,
I'm always falling my on knees and my face burried into my hands,
I'm not a robot you know?
I'm human, I have feelings, I have a heart.

I'm sick of being pushed down by a hammer like a nail,
I'm sick of you making comments over the tinniest things like my nose or my hair,
You know what? It ain't fair.
I don't even care, anymore,
So whatever you have in store..
Keep it in your pie hole.

I'm in the process of building a house, a shelter that'll keep me happy and safe,
Every time I put a brick on top of another..
You come and break everything and make a mess in my place,
Try to ruin my work again, I'll stuff your eyes with cement,
Oh sweet sweet revenge.

I'm not afraid anymore..
Im not a little bird anymore..
I'm a lion, I roar,
You push me down, I get back up,
Remember I'm not a robot,
I'm human, I have feelings, I have a heart,
But not only that, I have soldiers by my side,
Fight me?
Prepare to die.

Keep in mind, I'm human and so are you,
Whatever you can do, I also can,
Remember, I ain't no freak.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is about someone putting you down while ur trying to gain ur confidence cuz ppl do it even when they don't know. I wrote this from 1 till 3am so I appreciate of u like and comment. (This isn't an inspirational poem it's just like a speech what I'd like to say.. U know...)

Definitions:
I'm sick of being pushed down by a hammer like nail: I'm sick of you bringing me down.
Building a house, a shelter: my confidence (cuz confidence keeps you more safe and happy like home)
Bricks: little pieces of confidence (like when you gain confidence it goes step by step like bricks, one by one)
Soldiers: my friends and family (or just the people close to me)
I'm a lion, I roar: I'm strong /brave (something like that) I can speak up
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 February 2014

A brave adorable poem in excellent rhyme schemes! Well done. Great metaphors. But Who is bullying u and pushin u? A bad girl u know? Pls also coment my latest poem, 'selectin relaxation'

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Misnia Bahri Awaludin 27 December 2013

I can understand how you felt through the meaning of this poetry you have made.

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