Hubby's Train Poem by Philo Yan

Hubby's Train

Rating: 4.8


Hubby snores, a midnight train,
Left arm is giving me pain,
Eyes wide open, energy drain,
Can't fall asleep, I speak plain.

Fried chicken's to be blame,
High salt, High oil, the same.
In part I have to claim
I do feel a little shame,
Resistance futile, lame
Can't sleep, my hubby's train.

Cravings came, hard to resist.
We live to eat, what a twist.
Love of food so persist,
No use, give up resist.


Copyright Philo Yan September 10,2012

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It' 1.30 am at the time of writing this poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philo Yan 09 September 2012

Thanks Deepak Manchanda. Cravings came, hard to resist. We live to eat, what a twist. Love of food so persist, No use, could not resist. Romeo Della Valle for your generous and encouraging comments!

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Deepak Manchanda 09 September 2012

This was a good job of the brain. In future keep hubby's food quite plain.

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Romeo Della Valle 09 September 2012

Admirable! A well crafted write embedded with meaningful and touching words along with a very rich imagery! Short but powerful! 10+++ Your heart clearly spoke through this beautiful write! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City!

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