Adeline Foster

Rookie - 483 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

How Long Is Forever - Poem by Adeline Foster


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Heyyou Boy (1/8/2012 2: 31: 00 AM)
Amazing how so few words can hold such power. Great work. Even though you make it appear easy.
Kaila George (11/23/2011 5: 06: 00 PM)
Smiles...its very touching poem....and to the point actually...hmmm...in a mere few lines you summed up what we call our lives...nice

Comments about How Long Is Forever by Adeline Foster

  • Freshman - 942 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (4/21/2014 11:01:00 AM)

    Those yesterdays that we seem to have lost
    Searching for that perfect timeless pearl
    The nets now torn and the boat no longer fast
    And the approaching sunset an orange curled.........

    Brief words, maximum poetry........Keep your pen busy (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 287 Points marvin brato (12/27/2013 9:50:00 PM)

    Perfect expression....very insightful write1 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Rubab Atwal (12/21/2013 4:16:00 AM)

    a sweet and very inspiring...loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 585 Points Maya Hanson (12/17/2013 9:34:00 AM)

    So beautiful and inspiring! Thank you for your comment on So Many Words
    ~Maya Hanson (mye3) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,010 Points Susan Lacovara (12/5/2013 12:16:00 AM)

    What is said, in an instant, causing regret....a lifetime...and still not quick to forget. Kindness can also make time stand still....PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,769 Points Paul Brookes (11/17/2013 3:53:00 PM)

    True and to the point no sugared pill, regrets are forever. Better to have lived well and regret nought.10/10 BB (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Guenael Oristel (11/15/2013 9:54:00 AM)

    All I can say is Wow. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,966 Points Smoky Hoss (10/16/2013 9:43:00 AM)

    The rhyme is perfect, and the truth deep. Very good! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,250 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (10/5/2013 3:00:00 AM)

    one of the best short poems I've read in recent times, Adeline. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ehiowoicho Abah (9/30/2013 5:52:00 PM)

    So short, yet even more profound. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Alexander Beebe (9/27/2013 8:09:00 PM)

    Very nice Adeline! I wrote on time too. Seems to be a popular subject for poems. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,860 Points Dave Walker (9/25/2013 3:29:00 PM)

    A wonderful little poem, regret can be a hard thing to live with. (Report) Reply










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