How I Want My Kiss Poem by I Am Charlie

How I Want My Kiss

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He took her there
in front of all-
The searing kiss
in a hot embrace-
It made them burn
both skin and lips
while they sensually,
ground their hips.

they couldn't have found
a better fit
of line and hollows
that fit like this-
When one demands
the other yields.
Their hands explore
the bumps and dents,
smooth line of muscle,
the flow of skin.
They were burning,
they were consumed.
Beholden to no one,
that's how they kissed.

And I knew.
this, is how I want my kiss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Moonbee Canady 19 November 2009

Aaaah, The Kiss... The First Symbolic Merging... Very Passionate Write... Classy and Touching... This could be a great prelude to a great love-story... Moonbee

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Sabrina Jubahar 18 November 2009

beautifullllllllll! ! ! this has become one of my most favorite poems, ever! you described the scene so well, yet real. So GOOD! thanks for your great sweet thought!

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