How Can I Bleed My Feelings Out? Poem by Abhishek Tiwari
How Can I Bleed My Feelings Out?
This poem is the English version of my poem Kya Likhun?
What should I write?
How can I bleed my feelings right?
I introspect what should I write?
Oceans of feelings flow across my heart..
Volcano of tears burst in my eyes..!
Oh no! I cannot write...
How should I write, Mountain of feeling
in words like 'tiny flies'
I always introspect what should I write..?
But my heart you cannot stop me,
because I know,
I should write..
And Now whatsoever,
I'll bleed my feelings tonight
and
I will write and
I will write..
I prefer the english version coz the feelings in words have been brought up in much better way...keep it up!
How should I write, Mountain of feeling in words like 'tiny flies'- - - - - - - - - - - - - -> you have so many poems with outstanding lines like this! ! !
love in a word, excites; poem seems to sound like it... stand in the rain facing up until it stops... that abundance of wetness like the drippings from a cross turns us all into poets and into poems; like John, the one who describes himself as the one most loved. might leave less time for the bleeding of love from the 'SELF'. Good Stuff!
rather hyperbolic version you can say -intense volcanic eruption of feelings-though interrogative in form but not interrogative in sense-the dots in the last line are the hint of the continuation...doc sb stay cool plz-
wow... really grt poem.. full of emotionzz... nice title.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 3:59:42 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Just awesome... The hindi version is also very nice.. Specially the way you've used the delicate terms it's just awesome..