How Are You? Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

How Are You?

Rating: 4.9


'How are you and where are you? '
Would you mind if I so ask you?
Urge ran high so I asked you,
Do you think it right if I so ask you?

You were so nice and dear,
You are far away as I hear,
Pain is so high but I bear,
Find no means to stay just near,

Did I so offend?
lived so simple and ways also mend,
flowers and roses found its way,
I still found no other say,

You declined for a photo,
Even I had no such motto,
Still asked for a flicker,
But alas! you proved tinker,

Had it not been the business?
and love a commodity,
Had I not a been gentle man?
and you be a businesswoman

It would have been a reality,
A mere necessaisity and not the quality,
Be that not even turn farce,
Be that not rude but always be nice

Found in you always a treasure,
Enjoyment more but never a measure,
safety and securiy always I assure,
But you buckled under so pressure,

Was it a right path? I don't know,
In a prayer always I bow,
Still a mystery and no reason how,
It can be any but not sacrad cow,

You may stay calm and cool,
All will be fine and I only fool,
continue to stare but find no glare,
blaze from within but take no care

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suwarna Patil 09 August 2009

very well manner behavior...10

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Sulochna Pandit 10 August 2009

still courtsey rmains on line....10

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Raju Rajput 10 August 2009

still so much coolness online....10

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Jigisha Vyas 10 August 2009

good and kind words spokenby lady on line....10

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Maulin Shah 10 August 2009

it is kind courtsey....10

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Dwi Utami 05 August 2010

How are and where are you? __I'm fine and i'm here, .. Would you mind if i so ask you? __Oh no problem you ask that. Urge ran high so i asked you__okkkkk: thumb: Do you think it right if i so ask you? __of course i'think this is right....right..hmmm., tanks for ask.+10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 December 2009

‘…But alas! you proved tinker, …’ ‘…continue to stare but find no glare, // blaze from within but take no care…’ Tinker = Gypsy do you mean that…mismatch for love… And finally Poet realized ‘…but take no care’. I suppose she [or he] is a ‘No’ person… Excellent poem Tenner Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to new posts: 'Size Zero ~ Ground Zero' and 'Past'….comments if you please… niv

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Lola Habas 22 November 2009

Had it not been the business? and love a commodity, Had I not a been gentle man? and you be a businesswoman 10

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Saroj Davde 25 August 2009

You were so nice and dear, You are far away as I hear, .....10

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Reshma Punjabi 25 August 2009

'How are you and where are you? ' Would you mind if I so ask you? ....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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