House Number 974 Poem by Jasbir Chatterjee

House Number 974

Rating: 5.0


Once upon a time,
A newly wedded bride,
Showered with heaps of love and blessings.
With stars in her eyes,
Wearing rose-colored spectacles
Was ushered into house number 974;

With a temple on the left,
And a Gurdwara on the right,
Surrounded with lush greenery, beautiful flowers, chirping birds, and busy bees,
She thought life was going to be
One long, happy fairy tale.
But, alas, that was not to be…

A huge, black bat once entered their house.
The loving Mom-in-law shooed it out.
Then a few days later, their landlady dropped in.
She said she wanted her house back.
That too
In just 2 months!

A year later, their newborn child, a daughter, died!
Then a few days later, the husband lost his job.
With their whole world crashing around them,
They gathered their belongings.
Undeterred, with unwavering faith in God,
They left House number 974 and moved on…

Today, after so many years,
I gathered courage and stood below this house number 974.
While the ghosts of my past engulfed me in their arms
I looked up and for a long time,
I kept gazing at the staircase leading up to the house
And its open window…

A woman's face suddenly appeared at the window,
Forcing me to look away.
With my eyes moist and a lump in my throat,
I suddenly realized how fragile my existence still is.
Nothing is really mine.
Everything belongs to God, my present Landlord.

He gives generously when He is kind.
He takes away when He gets angry.
With a twitch of His eyelid, He snatches everything.
And I am only human with no way out.
In my surrender to God,
My present house is as good as house number 974.

House Number 974
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 24 August 2018

We all are like the inmates of House No 974 and live as per the pleasure of the God Almighty. The narrative rides on suspense like in a tale of mystery and then unfolds a philosophy of life. Thanks, Jasbir ji. A newly wedded bride.... ushered into house number 974; She thought life was going to be One long, happy fairy tale.... But, alas, that was not to be…

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 December 2015

While the ghosts of my past engulfed me. Nice work; with the muse of sadness.

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Bharati Nayak 12 December 2015

'Nothing is mine'- - - - - When we realize this fact, we get the wisdom to accept the ups and downs of life.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2015

Very wisely presented and story hidden behind this expressive poem improves qualities of thoughts. Surrounded with lush greenery, beautiful f lowers, chirping birds, and busy bees, this poem perfectly speaks about imagery. Very amazing sharing definitely...10

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Mj Lemon 27 October 2015

A very moving work. Reading this is an experience. The poem has a certain Gothic romance quality. A great poem.

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