! Horse And Rider Poem by Michael Shepherd

! Horse And Rider

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To lean forward in the saddle,
the reins slackened for a while,

to lean forward towards its ear,
its ear concerned with more immediate things,

across the muscled, tendoned neck
so much more a neck than human neck

with the urge to whisper some unformulated words
arising beyond a language, in the heart,

concerning some so briefly,
so deeply now perceived

of some equality hidden in humility
holding horse and rider

in some ancient bond of trust,
perhaps of love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Tyler 28 August 2007

You are probably now better than John Kay at writing these sorts of poems, Michael. It is a very touching piece but the choice of the word 'perhaps' ensures it doesn't become Disneyfied. Marvellous.

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Scarlett Treat 28 August 2007

Because I have ridden for years, I know that the last two lines of this poem...in some ancient bond of trust, perhaps of love....is the perfect description of that bond. For a puny human to control the might that a horse is, there must be that bond, and you have hit it perfectly.

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