Horrible Rhyme Poem by tiyler durden

Horrible Rhyme



this is a horrible rhyme
As I go on and on all the time
As my fingers almost entwine
as I whine and whine and whine.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M S 06 October 2006

I concur with additional line c'mon man, get a spine! not bad tho

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Danny Reynolds 06 October 2006

I think it was fine (Maybe needed another line?) Danny

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