Hopes Gone! ! ! Poem by krystal vincent

Hopes Gone! ! !

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Where has all my hope gone.I dont see it anywhere.Im searching high and low, but still can't seem to find it.What am I to do, without hope there is nothing left. I'm in my darkest dispear.All I want to know is if I'm alone or if someones there. I'm fighting battles I can't win, that are day in and day out. I try to get back up, but am thrown to the ground again by the people surrounding me. It's not their fist that knock me down.It's the hurtful words that make my heart pound. I'm tired of this life I live.When will it get better. I think never.It hasn't gotten any better as far as I can see, so why try anymore, If all your going to do is take everything away from me.What kind of life is this that I live, and how could cps call theirself my family. All they do is hurt me terribly.

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your right your poems remind me of my own, ive never been put in foster care, but my real mom abuses me, i now live with my best friend and his family.

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where has all my hope gone.I dont see it anywhere.Im searching high and low...hopes can't go any where otheriwse life will be over... good write dear. keep it up read mine dramland... hopes against hope and mary to marry with no separatw ways.

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~ Jon London ~ 04 July 2009

This is so emotional my friend...deeply expressed lines of the heart can be felt through-out this heart pulling piece....You write you feelings well....you have a natural ability to let flow your expression...well penned

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krystal vincent

fort worth texas, terrant county
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