Hopeless Obsession Poem by Sarah Reamey

Hopeless Obsession

Rating: 5.0


What am I suppose to do,
Because im still in love with you.
Your all I think about day and night,
This feeling is so, so right.
It'd be so much easier if you felt the same way too,
Because im still very much in love with you.
I hope and pray we can get our love back,
Because your the only thing in life that I lack.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melanie Johnson 03 January 2010

Love it... =) Great job.

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Allan O 05 November 2009

very well done again...come on Sarah..let go...let it flow and write....short writting is ok...but feel it inside and go Sarah..you can make some great writtings if you just feel it....you have the touch...read some of my stuff when you can...sad love..betrayel....dark poetry....i would like your input and perhaps it would show what i mean by let go...write..... thanks Sarah :)

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Steven Aragon 05 November 2009

By far, this is my fav. out of the three. I once felt like this...hopeless and obessesive, till i realized i was hopeless and obessesive...not a feeling i enjoyed very much and had to change.

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