Connor Whyte

Rookie - 5 Points (March,30th,1993 / Montana)

Hopeless


Strength is built upon fear, What is there to fear when you have no strength, You can't carry on if your weak. Some were chose to win, to lose its fate or is it destiny? You choose where to begin.

Time goes and you start to grow, Bad choices are made and you need to go. Do something wrong and you will feel it ten fold your body, Mind, And spirit will not hold, Like a baby bird without a mother defenseless and humble, Easy prey to strike at, Once your spotted they will never back down, Throw more things at you to see if you will drown.

You dodged the bullet its time to restart be honest and you will get a fresh start, We will take something you love because you are weak, They say it will keep you out of trouble which in the end will turn your brain into rubble.

Father forgive me I have sinned why do I even care you will always win. Your chance is over who cares if you made it one little thing and it will be fated, determined were you are your still a threat you can't pass it, Why let you be rewarded when punishment can be afforded.

Submitted: Friday, March 23, 2012
Edited: Saturday, March 24, 2012

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  • Rookie - 39 Points Makayla Straight (12/13/2012 8:10:00 AM)

    Why let you be rewarded when punishment can be affordable
    I love the way you put it. It is so true! !
    Thanks for another amazing poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points The devils Girl (3/28/2012 11:24:00 PM)

    I love this poem it shows everything uve told me all wrapped into one poem i love it it made me want to cry because i take things for graunted every day. Love this poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Jessie Jett (3/23/2012 11:42:00 PM)

    You have a unique style of writing. I like how you portray such an image, almost like a story of a lesson. (Report) Reply

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