Hope Shines At Morning Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

Hope Shines At Morning

Rating: 5.0


While morning comes with light,
It goes to sleep very deep night.
While dream goes away so far,
In far space giggles hiding a star.

Sun smiles and shines with hope,
People wake up to help and cope.
Work starts with prayer devotion,
All expect to walk in true motion.

Sound comes from Church bells,
From early morning nice bird tells.
Children gather to collect flower,
With early sun rays, shines a tower.

Unity is seen among flying birds,
Christmas comes boy sends cards.
Happiness dwells with lovely joy,
Children come to play with clay toy.

Christmas hope shines at morning,
All feel grace of God soon gaining.
Charm comes within billion of faces,
All get ready to win many new races.

Sun smiles to produce new fragrance,
We all proceed to success in patience.
In sea lives safely breaks danger a cod,
Life becomes cheerful in grace of God.

Saturday, December 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: christmas
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Very deep night goes to sleep while morning comes with light. Hiding a star giggles in far place while dream goes away far with night. With hope sun smiles and shines. People wake up to help and co-operate each other. Work starts with prayer and devotion. In true motion all expect to walk. From Church bells sound comes. A nice bird tells about this from early morning. To collect flower children gather. At that time a tower shines with early sun rays. Among flying birds unity is definitely seen. Christmas comes. That is why a boy sends greeting cards from morning to his belongings. Among all people happiness dwells with lovely joy. With clay toy children come to play. At morning Christmas hope shines. Soon gaining grace of God all feel this well. Within billion of faces charm comes. To win many races in life all get ready. To produce new fragrance sun smiles. We all proceed towards success with patience. A cod breaks danger and lives in sea safely. In grace of God life entirely becomes cheerful. This poem is based on such theme. This is written in Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2014

Sun smiles and shines with hope, People wake up to help and cope... nice lines....10 sun brings not only hope but stops negative approach to excel in life as such

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Salini Nair 08 December 2014

While morning comes with light, It goes to sleep very deep night......profound thought madam.....nice poem on christmas....enjoyed

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Salini Nair 08 December 2014

While morning comes with light, It goes to sleep very deep night......profound thought madam.....nice poem on christmas....enjoyed

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Salini Nair 08 December 2014

While morning comes with light, It goes to sleep very deep night......profound thought madam.....nice poem on christmas....enjoyed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 January 2015

While morning comes with light, It goes to sleep very deep night.nice lines...10 Where light is there Darkness has nothing to show here Path becomes aluminous Person walks continues Where light is there Darkness has nothing to show here Path becomes aluminous Person walks continues

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Daniel Brick 04 January 2015

There's a play by Eugene O'Neill called A LONG DAY'S JOURNEY INTO NIGHT. I love that title but the play is tragic and unrelenting; when night finally arrives, the characters are emotionally drained and find no rest in sleep. Your poem is just the opposite. It has the circular structure of a day beginning with promises, an afternoon of purposeful action and fulfillment at night. The hope which shines in the morning blesses people throughout their day. Your poem puts your readers in that same mood of hope, effort, fufillment.

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Heather Wilkins 30 December 2014

Life becomes cheerful in grace of God a lovely write

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 11 December 2014

Nice inspiring poem penned with wonderful loving lines on the eve of Christmas..........10/10

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 December 2014

Sun the hope on eath and words Sun smiles to produce new fragrance, We all proceed to success in patience. In sea lives safely breaks danger a cod, Life becomes cheerful in grace of God. very interesting thanks for share

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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