pain still persists by the hope
yet the storm on the sea
deep and dark far away today
oars when mired by the grief
eyes tryst yet twinkle to the moon
gleams when shadowed by the clouds
rain my come curtaining the glow
the hope of tomorrow seems to blur
plume when moves hither and thither
hope when homeless in its room
art hanging on the wall rills on
yet the frost stick upon the leaf of pine
it is yet stark grey sky as cloying
blue when never reneges the trust
mighty belief still bestirs the warmth
void seems to discern the desire…
the mind flusters by the glooms cathartic
blood trembles as it flows by the flux
night still crawls when cawed deep
heart yet rucks up being cowered
A poem full of fabulously memorable lines despite its despondent theme. The imagery invoked is breathtaking. Rgds, Ivan
Awesome and inspiring title...a must read for me...and I believe everyone! Hope is everything! Along with a Huge faith and persistance, Love and just a a Joy or zest for life... Thank you for sharing...10/10! Take care of u my friend, Shelley
Yet another fine example of your brilliance Doc....you show so much passion for change in the world......to show such faith shows heart and soul...not the power of mind...you're a fantastic writer...this shows as when we read...every word grows tiny wings and flies straight to the hearts of your readers.....It's message..Hope.. One day, the world will see that poets hold the key to living peacefully.. best wishes Doc.......'10' jon
‘…the mind flusters by the glooms cathartic/blood trembles as it flows by the flux /night still crawls when cawed deep/heart yet rucks up being cowered’ Yeah …may be it…? Heart rucks Puckers… When night Under the clutches Of catch and latch By purge cathartic… To give blood a nimble Not a tumultuous Tremble… Excellent poem 10+++ Ms. Nivedita UK
nice cognitive metaphor: '' the mind flusters by the glooms cathartic blood trembles as it flows by the flux '' the symbolism behind words trances like Freud's 'talking cure'and the basis of these very well expressed ideas are really centered around the process of catharsis...10+++ from me
another captivating piece... all your works are written with brilliancy...with different taste but all are amazing.....with depth struggle to survive..to carry on... despite the darkness in life.... still hopes for a new day.... inspiring piece anybody who is in distress will just have to read this and presto.....will feel that there is still hope for a beautiful tomorrow... 10+++++++++
This is a brilliant work from you as the struggle, conflicts strident waves and a ray of hope.. is it a new dawn? may be... Very impressive and a signitifcant one.. 10 + Rema
This is my favorite among your poems so far. I am drawn by the way you create a state where hope is needed and then remind us that hope is on the way and within our grasp.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Poignant, yet depicted the glimmer of hope that will prevail, a powerful write Dr. Kar! *10* Best regards, Friend Thad