Hope For A Good Day Poem by V P Mahur

Hope For A Good Day

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Sitting at the edge of dry, hot desert
Waiting for the clouds' thunder alert
A pair of distressed eyes with hope
Slowly the dry wood he chops

Bent with the burden of labored thirst
He lay panting on the burning crust
The angry sun does not give room
To any mercy for this fiery gloom

Gradually the light is softened
Declares another stressful day's end
And with all hope lost in the wild
He drags his leaned body like a sick child

Friday, June 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Composed on June 27,2014.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 07 July 2014

Very beautiful composition. Our day begins with hopes but by the end when all hope is lost, the heaviness is felt too hard. Beautiful way you have presented. I just loved the flow of words in rhymes...

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Akhtar Jawad 28 June 2014

A nice description of dejection and frustration.

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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