DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK


Home Sweet Home - Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Away for a day;
From home sweet home
To be a guest
Of life’s unforeseen ways
May tempt souls’stay
For a day, for a year
And not for ever
To bid home passion away
See the mountain
Sitting upon the plain
In his eternal chair
Closing the space around here
But in me the space can not
Close the home passion here
Home-sick heart, home it ponders
Built of love indeed so pure
A perfect home
Serene and nectarous
Opens heaven’s door
A wanderer back home
Back dovelet’s door
In the crowded street
Seen my crumbling feet
In the haunts of revelry
But happiness felt in home sweet
Always wish a home be found
Where selfish wish and cruel act
Never entertained and practiced
Ties of love always cherished and found
For each to each
We should always remain bound..............


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A poem on home..........

Comments about Home Sweet Home by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/8/2014 12:45:00 PM)

    So Beautiful is your home. It's really a home sweet home. The way you have portrayed home is very sweet and loveable. The words captivated me were......
    But happiness felt in home sweet
    Always wish a home be found
    Where selfish wish and cruel act
    Never entertained and practiced
    Ties of love always cherished and found
    For each to each
    We should always remain bound...........

    I loved reading each lines. Thanks for this Wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 30,755 Points Valsa George (2/8/2014 5:23:00 AM)

    A sweet home is the greatest gift of a man........! ! !
    Where selfish wish and cruel act
    Never entertained and practiced
    Ties of love always cherished and found

    We can be happy for sometime, staying away from home.... but home is our sweet abode and nowhere else one can have that feeling of completion and warmth! ! A great write! I invite you to read my poem..... My Home, though it deals with a different strain of thought! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,823 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (2/8/2014 2:48:00 AM)

    Many many thanks.............Amitabhji........I am humbled............. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,526 Points Amitava Sur (2/8/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    A nice description about the close bonding with sweet home with many memories in past..... love reading.
    You may read my MY SMALL LOVING LITTLE HUT (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 8, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 8, 2014


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