Luwi Habte

Rookie (19 march / Asmara)

Home sweet home


Better than higher hotel
Home sweet home is better to be there

More than better areas for fun
Home sweet home is better for nap

More than a vacation to great states
Home sweet home is better space

More than a journey which costs a lot
Home sweet home is delicious to stay on

After heaven before all
Home sweet home is best of all

Home sweet home!

Submitted: Friday, May 29, 2009
Edited: Friday, July 17, 2009

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  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (7/11/2009 5:44:00 AM)

    No place like home-- (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,382 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2009 12:49:00 PM)

    After heaven before all
    Home sweet home is best of all
    ..... beautifuk write and wife and husband should live in it happily.... nmake it heaven

    read mine ' a place called......' just augmenting ur views.. read ncomment on it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Olivia Lee Crowell (6/12/2009 9:13:00 AM)

    nice poem
    I like my home too (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fathmath Sana (6/8/2009 8:47:00 AM)

    let me guess... your home is the best place for you! better place! it sure is. for me too. i never get out of my house! HOME SWEET HOME!

    nice and excellent poem. really fascinating. you have a better glossary than me.

    keep it up my friend! ! ! !

    10/10 for my friend!

    love,
    Sana (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (6/6/2009 1:51:00 PM)

    More than a vacation to great states
    Home sweet home is better space

    More than a journey which costs a lot
    Home sweet home is delicious to stay on
    what a sweet stanzas of your very swet and rich poem..love the way you did it with very much professionally... best of luck dear firend (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Konjit Berhane (6/1/2009 11:33:00 AM)

    Great poem Luwi GReat one...

    you really must miss home...

    well keep on writtin

    peace (Report) Reply

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