Luwi Habte

Rookie (19 march / Asmara)

Home Sweet Home - Poem by Luwi Habte

Better than higher hotel
Home sweet home is better to be there

More than better areas for fun
Home sweet home is better for nap

More than a vacation to great states
Home sweet home is better space

More than a journey which costs a lot
Home sweet home is delicious to stay on

After heaven before all
Home sweet home is best of all

Home sweet home!


Comments about Home Sweet Home by Luwi Habte

  • Rookie - 142 Points Joseph Poewhit (7/11/2009 5:44:00 AM)

    No place like home-- (Report) Reply

    8 person liked.
    4 person did not like.
  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2009 12:49:00 PM)

    After heaven before all
    Home sweet home is best of all
    ..... beautifuk write and wife and husband should live in it happily.... nmake it heaven

    read mine ' a place called......' just augmenting ur views.. read ncomment on it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Olivia Lee Crowell (6/12/2009 9:13:00 AM)

    nice poem
    I like my home too (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fathmath Sana (6/8/2009 8:47:00 AM)

    let me guess... your home is the best place for you! better place! it sure is. for me too. i never get out of my house! HOME SWEET HOME!

    nice and excellent poem. really fascinating. you have a better glossary than me.

    keep it up my friend! ! ! !

    10/10 for my friend!

    love,
    Sana (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (6/6/2009 1:51:00 PM)

    More than a vacation to great states
    Home sweet home is better space

    More than a journey which costs a lot
    Home sweet home is delicious to stay on
    what a sweet stanzas of your very swet and rich poem..love the way you did it with very much professionally... best of luck dear firend (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Konjit Berhane (6/1/2009 11:33:00 AM)

    Great poem Luwi GReat one...

    you really must miss home...

    well keep on writtin

    peace (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, July 17, 2009


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