Home Stories (Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Home Stories (Senryu)

Rating: 5.0


Milk can overturned
The neighhourhood cats slink in
And lick the floor clean


A full cookie jar
Mother has excelled herself
Daughter overjoyed

A posie of flowers
Gifted by her little boy
Mother's heart just melts

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 22 July 2009

as always Sandra you have excelled with these pieces...Fi 10+++

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Indira Renganathan 22 July 2009

Wonderful muusing on home...wonderful sets of wording....excellent Sandra

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Maitreyee Joshi 22 July 2009

it gives me a cozy homely feeling.thanks

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Rakesh Bedi 22 July 2009

Very nice homely senryus!

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all three of them lovely...the second and third exceptional...10

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Anjali Sinha 04 August 2009

nice home stories -10 anjali

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Duh Huh 01 August 2009

Wow Sandra, i love how you put the artistic touch to moments so many take for granted. Lovely. Thank you for sharing your talent with us :)

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Bob Blackwell 01 August 2009

You have drawn a warming picture of life at home, after all it is the best place to be.

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These are all enchanting Sandra. The cats slinking licking the floor, now that would be a good way not having to clean your floors. How comforting the cookie jar is when it is full. Nothing like home made cookies! And the flowers, it's these beautiful things that make being a parent so worthwhile. Loved them all! 10 Karin Anderson

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Lynda Robson 30 July 2009

A lovely picture of your home stories well told, 10 Lynda xx

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