Home Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Home

Rating: 4.6


Home
is what widens between
the two heart- beats
whose decree is to leave
everything outside,
the insides
are never seen
though doorless
sunk as it is in dreams
in the other sunken life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 26 May 2017

As always a great piece of poetry! I missed your poetry for very long Sir. The real home is so well defined here. Yes, what's home without loving hearts and happiness...not mere bricks and cement. Bravo Sir

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Eesha Raaziah 26 May 2017

A great piece of poetry. where friendship is a daily guest. Enjoyed reading it!

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Mountain Man 26 May 2017

Home where the birds all sing all in the key of perfect harmony. Excellente poem.

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Mihaela Pirjol 26 May 2017

'' Home is where the heart is '' - your poem reminds me of this proverb.

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With beautiful expression, Created the poem. Nice one.

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Expiallidocious 29 December 2019

In each other's sunken life

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The beauty of home has splendidly been defined. Sunk as it is in dreams in other sunken life. Marvellous

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 July 2019

What a beautiful concept! Home is what widens between the two hear-beats. A lovely poem

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Anjandev Roy 08 July 2019

Magnificent write. Very profound in sense. Thank u. Anjandev Roy.

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AFFAQ NABI 15 March 2019

Wonderfully written i like this poem....

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