Home Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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It is simple home
Few people inside to welcome
Strongly attached
And easily reached

Mother is central figure
Father is dominantly a future
Brothers and sisters all like flowers
Just with fragrance after rainy shower

Life is seen as simple chance
Almighty might have been surely graced
‘The thought is often circulated among”
Everybody at home prays for not going wrong

Wishes are always there
Each one understands and silently bears
Respect and mutual trust is never absent
Family head is happy and so everybody present

Certainly it is living heaven on earth
Even though it is going to end with death
The bond is inseparable and life long
Everybody cheers up at happy song

This is real imagination
Sometimes there may tussle in relation
Some one is going against the wish
But there is an attempt to end with good finish

Family is after all one single unit
Where one has to care whether it suits or not
Some of habits are tolerated for the fear of unity
As no one wants to disturb the good name of family

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2013

pretty good M Joan Massat1 minute ago pretty good...a few lines seemed a tad confusing Comment +1 I LOVE THIS GREAT WORK KEEP IT UP.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2013

stan brierly2 minutes ago VERY WELL WRITTEN FROM HEART Comment +1 describes it perfectly

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2013

Shannon Ogome2 minutes ago i love the wishes are always there, each one understands and silently bears this is really beautiful and deep

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 December 2013

It is simple home Few people inside to welcome

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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