Home Poem by hannah baquiran

Home



Some people believe in 'home sweet home'
In home, you where with your family
In home, you can share with your family
what happen today
You can also share them your problems

But what if in your home...
you were scolded often by your family
even if its not your fault..
Do you still call it a 'home'?

And if you're going to tell them your problem..
instead of giving you some advice..,
They'll just scold or ignore you..
Do you still call it a 'home'?

What if in your home..
Your family are just there and yet
you can still feel awkwardness towards them
Is it still a 'home'?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 15 September 2008

A poem on home with uncommon taste. Nice job done.

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Thomas Viruvelil 12 September 2008

That is because they may not be showing their love to you And you need lot of display of love You can know their care and love when you really have a problem At this point you tend to look outside home for love which you need in plenty with lot of attention and care Some one may simply exploit your vulnerabilty

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