Holy Message Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Holy Message
Holy message
Find message
On page
When holy occasion is on card
You need blessing words
Keep on reserving
And observing
Your fast pattern
With no concern
I think this month has real power
To make you cooler
In temperament
In each movement
You have concentration
How the life shall have cessation
How this holy fast shall build plus account
What shall be real pureness from your fasts!
But believe me truly
It has power and strength to fill regularly
Your word reaches direct to him
Your fast purifies not only soul but entire body and joins holy team
After finish of holy month
You shall be making charity with sacred breathe
Paying Him to bless for more occasion to serve poor
And help to be on good terms with neighbor
Paying Him to bless for more occasion to serve poor And help to be on good terms with neighbor
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4/18/2024 6:18:08 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Hasmukh, why should I, an agnostic, read such a poem? It's just religious propaganda. Good poetry doesn't preach. Furthermore, if you're truly interested in writing good English verse, you'd better commit yourself to mastering the language. This poem is almost incomprehensible because of your ESL(?) issues. You need to immerse yourself in good contemporary English verse, poets like Mary Oliver and Billy Collins. That is, if you want to improve as a poet. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC