Holly Diver Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

Holly Diver

Rating: 4.5


Wings of black and gold
Eyes dark staring cold
Teeth of the thorned crown
Your scales nailed him down
Brimstone breath he sits on the throne
Made of fire skull wicked bone
Took his arrowed tail unlocked the leash
The dogs of hell he did release
He let his pets and demon children leave home
Up to the city streets free to roam
With no ray of light lost in forever night
On earth shall be no survivor
for now its owned by the holly diver

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Sisson 07 December 2008

I like this one! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Viola Grey 09 November 2008

'Teeth of the thorned crown'.... an excellent line that one...mixes the idea of stealing the crown right off the crucifix

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Chocolate Bunny 27 September 2008

I like this one, it's good.

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Tyease Collins 25 September 2008

Nice! A darker poem. I love the demon dogs. Excellent excellent excellent! 20/10 lol -Tess <3

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Emancipation Planz 23 September 2008

Sometimes I get really worried about boys tinking imagination... tonight has been one of them.... xx

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