Hold Your Breath Poem by Max D. Hornbogen

Hold Your Breath

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Well you might want to hold your breath for a while and hold on to my hand. Just until everything else fades away. So hold your breath and wait for that special moment to arise. So close your eyes and drift away into another place, a place where your thoughts will go. So hold your breath even when the world is in pain, can you feel the wind blowing against your face. Now hold you breath until everything else fades, now the wind is blowing hard against the trees. As you watch with your eyes you’ll see everything insight. So take this moment and put it in your memory, now it won’t fade away. So would you hold your breath until you sleep, now your in a dream that could never been true. So hold your breath, just until I go out that door.

Max D. Hornbogen

January 6,2008
10: 15 Pm

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 25 April 2008

Fantastic! ! ! ! great poem, well written and delivered a fine example. all the best J.L

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