Hold On To Me Poem by Brittany Cook

Hold On To Me

Rating: 5.0


I'm falling, catch me
weeping may i have been, dry my tears.
Sorrow, joy from you should give me my strength.
Hold on to me because I'm falling.
Save me, my fears have caught up to me
take me somewhere, ever so nice and quiet.
Show me you love me, my other fear says no,
Hold on to me for I am weak.
Lay next to me, in my dreams i am happy
Hold me tight, fierce love shows in your eyes,
sit with me, please don't go or fade away.
whisper you love me, in my little ear
Shake me awake when i have a nightmare.
Tell me everything's going to be alright
Hold on to me, Please don't leave me.
Whisper your cares and concerns
Tell me what you feel
Show me ever lasting love never forget me
Hold on to me, as it if were our last breath.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2011

Amazing! Wow! What an invitation! Yes, Brittany, everything will be alright with you! Your great poetic talent is so clearly shown through this well penned and poignant write that you must keep it up! 10+++ Well deserved! I honestly like your strength and potential shown in this fantastic, rich in imagery and fine texture write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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