Hold On, Hold Lose, Let Go Poem by taylor herron

Hold On, Hold Lose, Let Go

Rating: 5.0


Hold on because this could be the last
Hold on because the past is in the past
Hold on because this is all we've got
Hold on because the battle is never fought

Hold loose because soon i have to go
Hold loose because the truth you'll never know
Hold loose because this wont last forever
Hold lose because we just can't be together

Let go because i'm leaving now
Let go because i dont know how
Let go because we must be apart
Let go because i'm afraid-
you'll steal my heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Trade Martin 09 June 2009

Taylor, I quickly read your six poems, and you reveal promising talent. I would suggest that you keep reviewing other legendary poets (your choice) and keep writing on various subjects. Best regards, Trade Martin.

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