Sandra Martyres

(5th October / Mumbai - India)

Hitched (Senryu)


A gold wedding band
Flashes on her ring finger
Too late to back out

Submitted: Tuesday, August 25, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, June 08, 2011

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  • Yelena M. (8/25/2009 5:47:00 PM)

    Agree with Ted, this senryu can be interpreted in different ways.. :) As always you strike with words, Sandra..10+++
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  • Ted M (8/25/2009 5:08:00 PM)

    Hitched, freedom lost! Question is whose? The lady's freedom or the Man's?
    Love your choice of words. Very brief, but very effective. Nice write.. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Carl Harris (8/25/2009 4:12:00 PM)

    Your expressive senryu poem, 'Hitched' is a perfectly and expressively phrased senryu, Sandra, flawless in syllable count. It was a delight to read. You excell in this charming poetic form. Carl. (Report) Reply

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