Sandra Martyres

Rookie (5th October / Mumbai - India)

Hitched (Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres


A gold wedding band
Flashes on her ring finger
Too late to back out

Submitted: Tuesday, August 25, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, June 8, 2011

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  • Rookie - 69 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (8/30/2009 3:03:00 AM)

    Wow! What about the second thoughts? She saw in marriage function Hrithik Roshan? ? / Hahaha! Fine senryu (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (8/28/2009 7:57:00 AM)

    Oops! Too late! She has given away the gift of herself. Another excellent Senryu Sandra!
    You are the Senryu Queen of Poemhunter. 10 love Karin (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (8/26/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    a very effective senryu sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (8/25/2009 5:47:00 PM)

    Agree with Ted, this senryu can be interpreted in different ways.. :) As always you strike with words, Sandra..10+++
    Yelena M. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ted M (8/25/2009 5:08:00 PM)

    Hitched, freedom lost! Question is whose? The lady's freedom or the Man's?
    Love your choice of words. Very brief, but very effective. Nice write.. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carl Harris (8/25/2009 4:12:00 PM)

    Your expressive senryu poem, 'Hitched' is a perfectly and expressively phrased senryu, Sandra, flawless in syllable count. It was a delight to read. You excell in this charming poetic form. Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rakesh Bedi (8/25/2009 9:10:00 AM)

    A nice three liner with a meaningful message! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 586 Points Ramesh T A (8/25/2009 8:39:00 AM)

    Inevitable situation is well defined in this micro poetry! (Report) Reply

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