Hitched (Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Inevitable situation is well defined in this micro poetry!

A nice three liner with a meaningful message!

Your expressive senryu poem, 'Hitched' is a perfectly and expressively phrased senryu, Sandra, flawless in syllable count. It was a delight to read. You excell in this charming poetic form. Carl.

Wow! What about the second thoughts? She saw in marriage function Hrithik Roshan? ? / Hahaha! Fine senryu

Oops! Too late! She has given away the gift of herself. Another excellent Senryu Sandra! You are the Senryu Queen of Poemhunter. 10 love Karin

a very effective senryu sandra

Agree with Ted, this senryu can be interpreted in different ways.. :) As always you strike with words, Sandra..10+++ Yelena M.

Hitched, freedom lost! Question is whose? The lady's freedom or the Man's? Love your choice of words. Very brief, but very effective. Nice write.. Enjoyed it.