His Star Poem by Tareq Jalabi
His Star
i am sad
i am blue
i`ve nothing to live for
and nothing else to do
but to commit suicide or
live my life without you
i am nothing but a guy
who`s lost in the sky
his star and feels shy
he cannot admit
or even deny
that life at large
is just a lie
his star wasn`t born
and didn`t die
that life at large is just a lie his star wasn`t born and didn`t die I love this one
sad nor blue be commit no suicide face difficulties then your the STAR +++10 anju
I like the poem, I would say that suicide is a strong word to use but some times its just a feeling, I like the part where you say his star was not born and did not die its has feeling, a out there way to explain it.
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his star wasn`t born and didn`t die................................... touching and deep..... me too by the way, but i decided to live for me, noha and done
there are many stars out there waiting to shine upon you May God and angels come to you tonight and lift your spirit .... this moment and forever
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4/18/2024 3:19:42 PM # 1.0.0.1119
your poem made me realize something. i love your poems