His Gentle Gaze Poem by Christian Eliab Ratnam

His Gentle Gaze

Rating: 4.8


In the morning,
when I get up
His gentle gaze
gives me the
morning start.

In the noon,
when I am at work
His gentle gaze
gives me joy
and strength.

In the night,
when I go to sleep
His gentle gaze
is unto me
a lullaby.

Each day from
dawn to dusk,
MY SAVIOUR'S
GENTLE GAZE
Motivates my every task.

Copyright © Christian Eliab Ratnam 2012
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Onyemaechi 16 February 2006

Another writer with strong religious conviction...and a lovely voice to celebrate it! Warmly, Gina.

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Patricia Gale 17 February 2006

Lovely, very nicely written Patricia

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2022

This last stanza tells me, I cite here your concluding stanza: Each day from dawn to dusk, MY SAVIOUR'S GENTLE GAZE Motivates my every task. This poem shows your age, such youth and such a greatest belief!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 August 2022

A heart warming poem, a gentle Tribute to the Lord Almighty, a finest poem as Tribute to The Saviour,5 Stars TOP score

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Preeti - is here! 14 August 2006

It was beautiful! Preets

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Joe Breunig 20 July 2006

Another enjoyable write; nice job.

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Duncan Wyllie 28 April 2006

Beautifully written and as gentle as a caring gaze, Love Duncan

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