Him...No...Him (2) Poem by Ralph O'Grantson
Him...No...Him (2)
Still no answer
No sign of music
Full with anger
I watch time tick
Then what's this? what's this?
A sweet scenting work of art
A sudden twist in his kiss
Soothes my heavy laden heart
Looks at me in a different way
With cherish, passion and care
Elements of love come to play
Lifting me high in the air
It was he that was first
But what about the late comer
Looking right then left
Choosing just grows harder
I'm still following up and will keep you abreast with the progress.
i had thought it will all end in this second poem but unfortunately we will need to wait a bit longer.
OMG Ralph! ! ! there s more...smiles... shakes head I love this...intresting....its quite brillant really. Cant wait to read more.
I like it! Wonder who the poor young dame will choose, can not wait for the conclusion! Nicely written Ralph! ! !
Every poem that I read of you, seems to leave me baffled! Very nice write!
i can see the words, , very good.you might wont to work on the last line...........
...need to wait a bit longer.....yes. Run long...write more...
This is fantastic! ! I love your way of telling a story in poetry! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 3:11:41 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Another bravo, Ralph I just love your style and your vision! Fantastic!