Him Poem by Aisha Love

Him



Make his hurt
my hurt.
Make his tears
my tears.
Remove his sorrow
and add it to mines.
Take away his pain
so I can feel his pain.
Remove his anger
let it be my anger.
Remove anything bad from him
and give it to me.
Anything to make him smile.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philip Housiaux 16 April 2008

Very challenging because of the extremity of the views. Keep writing.

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Jade Hasbro 12 April 2008

wow that's a pretty strong poem.

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Aisha Love

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