Him Poem by robin machorro

Him



his eyes doesnt shine like a star
a duck walks better then he does
the way he sings is something you dont want to hear
you would never want to run your hand through his greasy hair
you would rather hear him sing then speak
his voice could get so high pitched at times
and his laugh it sounds like something out of control
but yet i find my heart racing... i find myself loving
everything about him



**i wrote this poem a year ago it was for my english class....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard D. Remler 21 June 2010

an enjoyable read Robin. Might spell check it, but not sure I'd change a single word. I like its blunt honesty and subtle humor. Well done. Keep Writing... -Rick

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Love can make us think and do strange things. Had a chuckle whilst reading. Good one!

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