High School Slinger Poem by Omar Ali Sabar

High School Slinger

Rating: 4.2


She was a high school slinger
Six times winner. She's the
dame of all the books that you'd read
She'd rub against your shoulder
Oh so much bolder, you'd hang on
everything that she said

You'd never see slimmer
But she craved to be thinner
Those magazines really got to her head
Face painted pale,
Her tonsils' evil blare
She made sure that she always got heard

She's a Ballroom swinger
Kareoke singer. She's the epitimy
of all that I dread
Her face a bit older,
A heart getting colder
How will you ever get fed?

Now she's a real Hum-dinger
A fiesty city minger
There's one thing you'll have to accept
On her roads to decieve
She still spreads her disease
Never leaving a heart unbled

So don't try to win her
Till you learn how to sting her
You'll be sleeping in an empty bed
For she'll take all your money
Then run to her Mummy
And leave you with a hole in your head

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 22 August 2008

forget subject matter and contents... all secondary...what primarily counts in a poem is the beauty and attraction of built up lines...wonderful poem presentation, Omar…a ten for you

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Marilyn Lott 22 August 2008

Oh my goodness, Omar, she's quite a gal to be wary of! Really captures the imagination. Loved it! Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Roy Storey 22 August 2008

Over all i like it, it has lots of movement and a good flow.

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Aisha Love 23 August 2008

wow this is a very strong poem great job

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Shalini Kts 24 August 2008

who is that girl, the highlight of your comment

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Ciara Schultz 09 April 2019

This is a great poem :)

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Indira Renganathan 31 August 2008

Wonderful....very pleasing rhythm....great write..10+++++

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Ravi Sathasivam 30 August 2008

Beautiful. I enjoyed reading your poem. You are lucky.

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Very well expressed! Thanks! best regards, joan d.h.

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Colin Jeffery 26 August 2008

Very good. Enjoyed learning a new word ' Slinger '

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Omar Ali Sabar

Omar Ali Sabar

Bellshill, Scotland
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