High About System Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

High About System

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Nobody can speak high about system
That the pattern or model is suiting them
It may have its inherent flaws
From where they can draw the strength

Mighty people may have some say
Powerful may snatch the big slice away
The power game may exert influence
It may remind always about the presence

The poor people always suffer most
They may have certain voice to cost]
Yet that remains confined to limited space
With bad system to provides with no good choice

Many countries may claim and talk high
But people are left high and dry
Lawlessness has surfaced now in street
Where people express their anguish and greet

How far people can tolerant apathy?
How long they can live on mere sympathy?
Why poor can not be taken care of?
Why rich too can not be accommodated?

No doubt, it is people’s representation
But it still remains full with lot many questions
Why some of the problems can not be addressed?
Why people’s life can always be made cheap and chased

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

Nobody can speak high about system That the pattern or model is suiting them

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2014

nice job Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 1 day ago nice job

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 4 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

welcome Emma R Michael and Victoria Loberiza Grana Padillo like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

superb Michelle Bay16 minutes ago great poem. makes a great statement. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 January 2014

Bit wishy washy Alexander Clifshaw13 minutes ago Good points, needs better structure to allow the annunciation to give greater impact to the main points you are saying, at the moment you get a little lost

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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