Hidden Intentions Poem by Jemima Rivas

Hidden Intentions

Rating: 2.8


Hidden Intentions
You looked at me
I had no idea who you be
To me you be what you looked
My heart you taught you took
I was wrong; tis my song
Every time I think
I am glad I did not sink.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
George Price 26 July 2013

This has a rather wonderful song-like quality to it; it sweeps and glides. Keep it up! Oh, and thanks for the comment, much appreciated! GHP

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