Hidden Emphasis - Acrostic Sonnet – Ideogram Images Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

Hidden Emphasis - Acrostic Sonnet – Ideogram Images

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Incorporating verse in gilded frame
Does not, as such, suffice, - vice to conform.
Each should follow conscience, - smile, rile, charm, scorn,
Open communication’s blinds. The aim: -
Grace, harmony, unite undying flame.
Reader reaching reads writer’s fact and form,
And from lettered morse ex…tracts the uniform.
Melts surface mask, tunes head to heart too tame.
Impression web we spin, verse threads, to claim
Mankind for man, for freedom, and perform
A sacred quest whose source rejects the ‘norm’,
Grafts sixth sense insight rich which Norms prename.
Each line’s a coded thread ink linked through rhyme,
Song which should find a way to challenge Time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Georgios Venetopoulos 21 May 2015

You have managed well with the counting of syllables but your Iamb presents some inconsistencies.

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