! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Hibiscus- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Hibiscus- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.7


Red Hibiscus cheers
At dawn in an earthen pot;
By dusk, smile wiped off...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 10 July 2009

A heavenly hibiscus haiku...hurrah for you! !

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Sandra Fowler 10 July 2009

The charm of changing moods. Lovely imagery. Always your friend, Sandra

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Kesav Easwaran 10 July 2009

hidden symbols...nice imagery...thanks...10

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lovely haiku...a short and joyful life

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Pandian Angelina 10 July 2009

Life in short! Each blooming flower Doth remind The fate that lies ahead Is to fade and simply wilt! Angel

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Ritty Patnaik 08 August 2009

very interesting haiku on a red hibiscus.normally used to adorn the godess as a favourite flower.i have a poem called one day one life, on similar lines.i am happy you are fond of gardening too! best wishes, ritty

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 July 2009

I havenot observed this. But very beautiful and great is your eye on nature.

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Indira Renganathan 24 July 2009

Good haiku...normally in tamilnadu hibiscus is a pooja flower and is known for its medicinal qualities...its concoction is taken in for body cooling and it is a herbal remedy for hair falling...thanks

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This tells a story in the day of a Hibiscus with flare and imagination. Well done! Karin Anderson

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C. P. Sharma 21 July 2009

Perhaps they shine in the morning freshness and retire after the day's tiring glory. CP

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