Hi-Hi! Black Hole Is Out Of The Sky Poem by Harindhar Reddy

Hi-Hi! Black Hole Is Out Of The Sky

Rating: 4.5


Darkness imprisoned me, all that I know now
is absolute horror, I live not I die not
Trapped in my thoughts: without stars
My body can't hold my soul, Nor my
mind controls my physical stature'
To be a rock and no need to roll
I tiptoe toddle down the road, my own
Phantom is taller than my soul and a frown.


I'm about to break downright,
You keep me alive show the way...
Day light dies and a black hole is out of sky,
Does anyone care it? Is somebody up there? None
Take this life, empty inside knocked outside, ouch
I'm already dead, I'll rise but to fall over all again....'
I tiptoe toddle down the road of my own
Phantom is taller than my soul and a frown.

Tuesday, July 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: dark blue
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shania K. Younce 10 July 2014

Very, very well done. Well put. There is a constant rhythm. With a wonderful picture. Bien!

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Harindhar Reddy 19 May 2020

I'm grateful for your amazing review on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Wahab Abdul 06 July 2014

harindhar, this is beautiful man, very creative, keep going......quite successful poem.love it.

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Harindhar Reddy 19 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing review on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 July 2014

Beautiful lines...To be a rock and no need to roll.... Phantom is taller than soul and a frown Very true said, when thoughts gets trapped in darkness, one is swinging between life and death....... Loved reading it. Beautiful way you have presented it.

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Harindhar Reddy 19 May 2020

Thank you for the amazing review on the poem πŸ™πŸ™πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Harindhar Reddy

Harindhar Reddy

Haliya, Hyderabad, India
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