Here Lies The Success Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Here Lies The Success
Here lies the success
When you have all access
Your are the hero
So do not attempt for zero
What you is not to be proven
Success may com all of sudden
You are worthy to be called
A successful man is always proudly walked
World may salute to those
Who aim for and not suppose
The victory ahs to be there
As no fake claim is made here
If you deserve any position
Go all out for its retention
It has to be achieved as honor
Nothing here is minor or major
I advise all not to remain idle
Life must be carved out of struggle
You may know the price of little sweating
Enemy can be made to face beating
Ultra Violet Who canbring shine in ablackhole? Not everyone is still in heaven.
I like the theory Nathan Gionet1 minute ago Wording is ok, could improve...reminds me of sport Comment +1 Honestly, I'm struggling with this a bit...
David LekichLess than a minute ago The language and rhythm is a bit disjointed. I think you last stanza encapsulates your message, but the prior stanzas lack consistency and focus. The theme of rising above adversity and being the better for it is universal; give this another shot- your passion is evident and your effort to be commended.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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