Her Smile Poem by louis rams

Her Smile

Rating: 5.0


It was her smile that caught my heart
The smile that set her apart.
A smile so captivating
That had my heart hesitating.

Her smile like the sun rising in the east
Putting your mind completely at peace.
She had a smile that could melt butter.
Like her - there is no other.

Now she is going away - 'and to where'
She would not say.
She packed up her bags and boarded the train
And my heart will never be the same.

She smiled at me once again
as the train neared the end
Yet! As the train had pulled away
I thought I saw A teardropp in her eyes,
as if she was about to cry.

I got her friend to tell me why she had left
When she told me - it was because of a test.
All sorts of thoughts started to enter my mind
That she had cancer or was going blind.

Her friend said She had passed the military test
and wanted to surprise me with the rest.
That she agreed to marry me and we
Could live on camp rent free.

Her smile I will now see every day
And to my lord I do pray.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 26 February 2019

This is a beautiful poem, Louis. I'm a big fan of happy endings! And it made ME smile! Also, it gets a 10.....

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Louis Rams 26 February 2019

I am glad you liked this poem and the ending

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