Her Maker Poem by jayne carpenter

Her Maker

Rating: 4.3


You anger me so,
With the unresponsiveness that you show,
You loved her with breathless inner soul,
You held her with such sweetness and tender glow,
What has happened to my daughters maker?
You have been taken from your role,
Oh my daughters maker,
She awaits your call,
She longs for your adaptiveness that once was you,
She is growing with talented tender toes,
Oh my daughters maker,
She needs you,
and you are making her go at it alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 15 February 2014

The poem has an eye catching title. The emotions expressed revolve on 'her'. What about yours?

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Dr.subhendu Kar 13 July 2010

and you are making her go at it alone. innocence yet befuddles in vale of tune love when ruffles being hidden away of grace, beautiful write love when shadowed by clouds,10++, thanks for sharing

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Joseph Poewhit 11 July 2010

Interesting perspective of a love situation

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