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louis rams

Rookie - 457 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

Her Beauty In Winter


I saw her on a cold winter night
Her beauty made my heart take to flight
The loveliest woman my eyes had ever seen
She was my beauty – she was my queen.

Her eyes shone like the reflection off of the water
Blinding, hypnotic, putting me in a trance
All of this at first glance.
Her hair flowing in the wind
Like the beauty of an eagles wings in flight
Covering the sun from my sight.

She is a rose blooming in the winter snow
How that was possible – I’ll never know.
She is the rainbow high in the sky
Extending her beauty from one end to another
Like the love of a mother.

She is like the ocean – deep, dark, mysterious
Treacherous and yet calm and can take you
Deep into the depths of her soul, where she will keep
You and take hold.

Her beauty on that cold wintery night
Drained me from all my will and my might.
Beckoning me to join her in the snow
Freezing my heart with nowhere to go.

Her hands calling me to come to her side
And telling me: ” my love is as pure as the white of this snow
Can’t you see it, please don’t go “.
I walk into the snow with my arms outstretched to her
Feeling her love pulling me in like the ocean pulling the sand
Taking me deep into a wonderland.

FINDING TRUE LOVE AT LAST!
© L. RAMS


Submitted: Wednesday, September 04, 2013
Edited: Thursday, September 05, 2013

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  • Freshman - 2,239 Points Patricia Grantham (9/24/2013 8:53:00 AM)

    Well Louis you have outdone yourself this time. Another great and
    wonderful work you have written. Your words of love and magic
    permeates all through this passionate write. Her beauty has
    transcended even through the harsh winter cold. A love that
    would melt any frozen ice. Well written and crafted. (Report) Reply

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