Helpless Flower Poem by Vidyadhar Durgekar

Helpless Flower

Rating: 5.0


At night.blossoms the cirrus flower,
Darkness can not see its pure splendors,
To please the darkness with its colour,
With lure & fear the flower surrenders,
Darkness relishes the sweetness of nectar;

Day waits to see the flower in its grace,
By the time darkness had kissed its face,
Knowing well with greatness accepts the farce,
Helps the clour and fragrance to spread and enhance,
Other side of the world, night continues with another advance;

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joelstine Gonzaga 21 March 2008

wow.....im speechless..its beautiful!

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Tsira Goge 21 March 2008

Vidyadhar, 'Other side of the world, night continues with another advance; ' It is surprising poems Which Differs air lyricism and sensitive metaphors... Tsira

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Barry Van Allen 21 March 2008

Vidyadhar, Was it just me or was there something just a little bit sexy going on with that flower? B.V.A.

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Sandra Fowler 21 March 2008

You paint a mood picture of some depth. Your last two lines are your best lines. Excellent write. As always, Sandra

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Blue angel Florida 21 March 2008

Lovely 'Helpless Flower' surrendering herself to day and night, enjoying life to its fullest enchanting.

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Thad Wilk 12 July 2008

A powerful and capturing write Vidyadhar! A pleasure indeed to read! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Dawn Slanker 05 July 2008

Once again, another beautiful work of art.

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Brandon Dugan 10 June 2008

really really nice poem i enjoyed reading it every line was well written.....great job

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Mamta Agarwal 06 June 2008

God has made such plans that we have flowers blooming in allseasons and day and night. the fragrance of flowers that bloom at night reminds of their presence. a lovely poem with beautiful imagery.

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Kesav Easwaran 16 May 2008

Blind nights do miss the splendors and colors of the ‘flowers’ that bloom in nights... a story of the ‘other side’ of the world? ‘The day knowing well with greatness accepts the farce…’ A very deep line! Excellent write, vidyadhar! a ten...

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