Hello Sire! The Birds Were Entangled In The Wires, Poem by Harindhar Reddy

Hello Sire! The Birds Were Entangled In The Wires,

Rating: 4.8


God
Sent from
the
sky a
jar of tiny
stars, tied
to
a moon's
beam - The birds
were entangled
in the wires,
don't think
to
get free,
echoing thoughts
2-1-2-1
That rest
deep
in my
breast.




###Copyright © Harindhar Reddy @ 2015###

Wednesday, February 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: imaginings
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The Waltz Wave is:
• a poem in 19 lines.
• syllabic,1-2-1-2-3-2-1-2-3-4-3-2-1-2-3-2-1-2-1 syllables per line.
unrhymed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 05 February 2015

Quite Interesting write. I loved reading each lines. Beautiful presentation.

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Harindhar Reddy 19 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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