* * * Heavenly Varnishing... Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

* * * Heavenly Varnishing...

Rating: 2.7


The day was such unusual.
Not only sad and rainy...
Heavenly varnishing...
Was plaintive as never...

The master was advance-guard-
Romanticist boundless one...
But has lost his easel
Of moon, silvery such...

The brushes was lost there
Between star's & meteorite's
You think it is artist the
Breeze: - Yes, but here is...

Masterpiece of this mornings -
Cloud... my cloud, my could
Has departed who -o-o-o..
Who when and where? ..

The day was such unusual.
Not only sad and rainy.


Tsira Gogeshvili

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Costa Anakiev 29 March 2009

Tsira, I like all the ideas here, but while reading this poem I suddenly thought, 'Perhaps she just translated the words without thinking anything else', and burst into laughter. Konstantin.

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Sandra Fowler 22 March 2009

Extraordinary imagery.Like a rainscape painted on a windowpane. You have captured sadness just at the moment of its vanishing... And your whispers have been heard, Tsira.10 without hesitation. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Fiona Davidson 22 March 2009

Great images here Tsira...rainy days always seem a little sad don't they...thank you...10++

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