* * * Heavenly Tree Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

* * * Heavenly Tree

Rating: 3.4


Heavenly Tree


There were planted heavenly tree:

Which then blossomed, by stars threes,

One- laughs only... one, lovely cries,

Third- dreaming always for lunar kiss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 20 August 2009

As aways Tsira your poetry is so expressive...wonderful piece...Fi 10++++

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Ramin Chaman 29 November 2009

Hi Tsira i love your structure of a poem..special this one..There were planted heavenly tree... There existed heavenly bodies..........10+

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Sandra Fowler 01 September 2009

Sometimes brevity is beautiful. This is one of those times. Take care. As always, Sandra

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Lynda Robson 20 August 2009

Great write Tsira, imaginative and inventive, 10 Lynda xx

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Daniel Kempson 20 August 2009

Beautiful words Tsira worth more than the ten I can give your friend Daniel

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Fay Slimm 20 August 2009

Your tree sounds very 'heavenly' Tsira - - I saw it in my mind's eye....10 from Fay.

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