Heaven On Earth Poem by Craig Mize

Heaven On Earth

Rating: 5.0


As the wind blows the tree limbs wild and freely
And the leaves dance on the ground so beautifully,
My eyes wonder carelessly to the flower bed
A field covered in blues, violets, yellows, and reds
Such beauty that grows up from the pits of hell
Steady giving praise to the Lord from the heavens above
I look up into the clouds at the deep blue of the sky
And see the birds souring so brilliantly and free
I knew right then that this was the life for me
Where I can live in a place that has heaven on earth.

Monday, July 19, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: peaceful
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Essa 19 July 2010

....................................wonderful poem! ...........................................................

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Alicia Moore 23 July 2010

Extroadinary =.^-^.=

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Unwritten Soul 23 July 2010

u got the midas hand...create midas touch in poem...everything turn into gold by your beautiful sight and heart, flowed by pen! .... it remind me some older, past time... keep writing..i'm looking forward for all your beautiful masterpiece! weel done and good luck :)

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Dwi Utami 27 July 2010

HEAVEN ON EARTH. EVERYONE belive the heavens.this is my hope place*and you creat mix with the colours of nature great of you, hey friend you also read my poems ok, and how i'm writing englsh god or no! +10for u

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 June 2018

Steady giving praise to the Lord from the heavens above I look up into the clouds at the deep blue of the sky And see the birds souring so brilliantly and free.....praising God after meditating on the beauty of nature....... this poem gives peace...... as i read i was peaceful. thank u dear poet. tony

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Sochukwu Ivye 12 October 2017

The Elysian hue is all over here. A message about an enclosed royal park. Bear with my diction, but your pen motivates beyond hope, dear poet. Thanks for sharing this lenient but salient piece with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 July 2017

My eyes wonder carelessly A field covered in blues, violets, yellows, and reds Steady giving praise to the Lord This is the life i need. heaven on earth. A fine description of beauty, serenity and peace. Very good observation of the beauty in nature. Thank you for this fine poem. tony

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Jenny-lynn Lavoie 26 April 2011

I loved this one beautiful 10/10

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Gita Ashok 27 July 2010

You have painted such a fabulous picture of heaven in multi-colored hues. My eyes feasted on it and my mind travelled all the way to heaven and is back to reality now! Thanks for sharing this one. Enjoyed reading it thoroughly.

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Craig Mize

Craig Mize

gainesville GA
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