Heaven Among Roses Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
Heaven Among Roses
Roses red with the flames teeming of fire,
Mirrored their poise glowing free in their briar.
Their hearts rousing in poise are mounting higher
To heaven's dainty air they do aspire.
Aspiration revolved like wind they ride
Much onto estate promising well in tide.
In clouds of flawless beauty they abide,
Favour from providence is on their side.
Dawn streaming in their veins with light to shine,
Of vision victory stays in their line.
Perch onto dark never will they from light,
For stay they will in their spirits in flight.
Air borne to ascend, roses red hit the sky,
Smog-viewed such has been to mediocre eye.
Thank you for your invitation to read. I love your titles and when I have time, I will be reading more of your works. This poem is very powerful. You have good strength in your words. I will read more later. Please read something of mine too? Thank you, Deborah Cromer
excellent indeed! I liked the closing rhyme scheme as aabbccdd.... 10+
You must enjoy roses as much as me. Thanks for getting in touch.
as i have observed, this is beautiful...it rhymes...the thought derives from the title..total evaluation is 10..grace
I enjoyed the way this poem flows... and the topic lends itself to a warm, tranquil reading. Your vocabulary compliments your devices, as well. Heaven on earth can be this easy... forget the mediocre eye.
to me 'heaven among roses' is an image of 'relationship- the presence of man with rose (female) is like heaven'. the experience of balance between nature's law...
nice poem, but try not to repeat the same word in the same paom and directly after each other: aspire and aspiration
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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greate work dear sir. the rhyming is there...at first i thought you are doing a sonnet but in the few last lines were not on the standard of abab, cdcd, efef, gg... but i would say your work in beautiful. i like it